I would say you got it quite well, the only areas that I think need attention are the highlights on the right of her head and neck...they are blown-out and perhaps that is too harsh a contrast to the rest of the skin tones.
I'm normally not a fan of HDR, but when I do I try really hard to not overdo it (it's so easy to do it though). Would you say this one was overdone, or within a good region?
Pretty girl, she has lovely eyes.
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